Tuesday, March 3, 2020

Clara DeMagalhaes                                                                                               Current Event #17

Dollinger, Arielle. “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 22 May 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/05/22/nyregion/murder-conviction-vacated-keith-bush.html.

At 17 years old, Keith Bush was suspected of strangling a 14 year old girl and was promptly incarcerated after having to sign a confession. Despite this, he always fought to clear his name, and wrote to a lawyer called Adele Bernhard, asking her to help his case. She took it, and her subsequent investigation turned up evidence inconsistent with the confession statement and other conclusions, such as how the cause of death detailed in the confession didn’t match the girl’s actual cause of death. Additionally, DNA found under the victim’s fingernails didn’t match Bush’s DNA, and a witness who said she saw him leave with the victim the night of the crime recanted her testimony 5 years later. Most importantly, Bernhard obtained records of the case saying that the police had another suspect for the murder - John W. Jones Jr., who made a statement to the police. These statements were never told to Bush’s defense lawyer, which is a violation of evidence rules. Bernhard took the records to the district attorney, who concluded that the prosecutors had engaged in a deliberate cover up. “‘At the end of the day, we came to some very simple conclusions,’ Mr. Sini said. ‘We don’t believe Mr. Bush committed this murder. We believe Mr. Bush was denied a fair trial. And we believe that John Jones is a more probable suspect in this crime.’” 44 years after his arrest, John Bush’s conviction was thrown out and he was absolved of the crime.

A case in which an innocent person is wrongly convicted and imprisoned or worse is an unfortunate event that isn’t uncommon. This event can hopefully encourage more careful procedures and standards in the criminal justice system to ensure that an occurrence of deliberate misconduct doesn’t happen again. Furthermore, the methods used to uncover the true conclusion to this case are a signal of the advances of forensic science, which will likely be more accurate and reliable in the future.

Overall, the article was well-articulated and was a decent length. It does a great job at stirring emotion in the reader, making one feel great sympathy for the formerly suspected criminal. Yet it doesn’t overdo it to the point where it feels artificial. The use of pictures and quotes from various people involved in the case was also helpful because hearing their personal thoughts helps lend credibility to the author’s retelling of the story. However, one thing that I think could have been included was a description of what Bush is now doing after he was absolved, such as the job that he might have or if he might be engaged. It would be a satisfying conclusion to have some closure provided about that.

5 comments:

Unknown said...

Madison Meehan
3/3/20

Dollinger, Arielle. “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison.” The
New York Times, The New York Times, 22 May 2019,
www.nytimes.com/2019/05/22/nyregion/murder-conviction-vacated-keith-bush.html.

https://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=4250390869532540972&postID=4755914783486893412

The article Claira chose to write her current event on, “‘No One Would Listen’: Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison”, was a great choice as it provides a lot of information about forensics. Clara did a very good job explaining just how it connected to forensic science, making sure to provide a lot of detail. Another thing she did well was making sure to include quotes from the article to verify the information she was providing for the reader. Lastly, Clara provided her insight on the murder that took place and what her opinion was on the situation.

Although Clara did a very good job with her current event, there are some things she could have done better. One thing she could’ve changed was providing a more clear summary of the article. Even though she described its relevance she didn’t describe the case in immense detail, which was slightly confusing. One more thing she could’ve done better was the ending of her current event. She could have critiqued the article a little more thoroughly, but other than that it was very good.

I learned a lot I didn’t know about forensics from this article and Clara’s review. The fact that someones conviction can be thrown away due to forensic evidence even after 44 years is crazy to me and it just shows how important forensics is in the real world. I really enjoyed reading Clara’s current event and took a lot of information away from it.

Unknown said...

Dollinger, Arielle. “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 22 May 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/05/22/nyregion/murder-conviction-vacated-keith-bush.html.

https://bhscsi.blogspot.com

Clara DeMagalhae’s review of “'No One Would Listen' was really interesting. The article details, Keith Bush who was suspected of strangling a 14 year old girl and was promptly incarcerated after having to sign a confession. Despite this, he always fought to clear his name, and wrote to a lawyer called Adele Bernhard, asking her to help his case. She took it, and her subsequent investigation turned up evidence inconsistent with the confession statement and other conclusions, such as how the cause of death detailed in the confession didn’t match the girl’s actual cause of death. Additionally, DNA found under the victim’s fingernails didn’t match Bush’s DNA, and a witness who said she saw him leave with the victim the night of the crime recanted her testimony 5 years later. This article gave a great overview of the case and more importantly how DNA changed the way people saw it. I chose this article because I am personally very interested in DNA analysis.

To improve this comment I would instruct Clara to really try and better explain why DNA changed the case. You had to make some assumptions when reading this article. I really like how the article was very concise and explained the case very clearly. Overall, this article just needs to make a few small changes, but it is very good!

My learning impression from this article as usual is the importance of forensic science and DNA technology. More importantly forensic science has the power to really change crime cases. I chose this article because I thought the DNA analysis was very interesting. This has changed my life understanding because I now can see how forensic science is applied to real work and how it is indeed very important.

Unknown said...

Dollinger, Arielle. “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 22 May 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/05/22/nyregion/murder-conviction-vacated-keith-bush.html.

https://bhscsi.blogspot.com

Clara DeMagalhae’s review of “'No One Would Listen' was really interesting. The article details, Keith Bush who was suspected of strangling a 14 year old girl and was promptly incarcerated after having to sign a confession. Despite this, he always fought to clear his name, and wrote to a lawyer called Adele Bernhard, asking her to help his case. She took it, and her subsequent investigation turned up evidence inconsistent with the confession statement and other conclusions, such as how the cause of death detailed in the confession didn’t match the girl’s actual cause of death. Additionally, DNA found under the victim’s fingernails didn’t match Bush’s DNA, and a witness who said she saw him leave with the victim the night of the crime recanted her testimony 5 years later. This article gave a great overview of the case and more importantly how DNA changed the way people saw it. I chose this article because I am personally very interested in DNA analysis.

To improve this comment I would instruct Clara to really try and better explain why DNA changed the case. You had to make some assumptions when reading this article. I really like how the article was very concise and explained the case very clearly. Overall, this article just needs to make a few small changes, but it is very good!

My learning impression from this article as usual is the importance of forensic science and DNA technology. More importantly forensic science has the power to really change crime cases. I chose this article because I thought the DNA analysis was very interesting. This has changed my life understanding because I now can see how forensic science is applied to real work and how it is indeed very important.

Randy Ayala said...

Randy Ayala Valdez
Mr. Ippolito
Forensic Science
3 March 2020
Current Events 17
Dollinger, Arielle. “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 22 May 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/05/22/nyregion/murder-conviction-vacated-keith-bush.html.
Clara reviewed her article in an informative manner, stating relevant facts with covering the topic. Her review possessed minor details and some feedback to the claim that forensic science can help absolve victims of injustice. She did not overcompensate and include unnecessary information in the review. Clara was very clear and concise about the content of the case. She also provides the readers with dates and names, building her credibility by utilizing that data.
Clara could improve her by giving more valuable feedback on the author of the article. If she offered more information from another standpoint, the review would have given the reader a stronger review. She could also benefit from forming a prominent connection between forensic science and the case, emphasizing the study of DNA testing in relation to the solving of this injustice.
I learned about the use of forensic science, particularly DNA testing to help solve criminal cases. Diligent and safer procedures need to be implemented in this field so people receive fair trials and opportunities.

Charlotte Dotson said...

Charlotte Dotson
Mr. Ippolito
Current Event 18
3/9/20

Dollinger, Arielle. “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison.” The
New York Times, The New York Times, 22 May 2019,
www.nytimes.com/2019/05/22/nyregion/murder-conviction-vacated-keith-bush.html.

Clara’s review of “'No One Would Listen': Cleared of Murder, After 33 Years in Prison” was very interesting and informative. Clara did many things well to make this review so interesting. First, she connected the contenst of thre article to forensic science in a very comprehensive manner. Additionally, Clara provided a perfect amount of quotes to add validity to her statments while still using her own thoughts/words. Lastly, I liked that at the end of the review Clara’s opinion on the article was very well thought out and articulate.
One thing Clara could imporve for this review would be her summary. I thought it missed a few signifigant aspects of the artice. For example, the importance of DNA in this case could have been empahsized a bit more.
Overall, Clara did a great job with her review. This article further emphasized to me the importantce of accurate DNA technology. Furthermore, it made me think about all the people who were sent to jail on the basis of innacruate forensic technology.