Tuesday, November 28, 2017

Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t Commit.

Justin McCarthy
Mr. Ippolito
Forensics Science 12H
Current Event 9: Jerry Brown Pardons Man
Due November 29th, 2017
Hauser, Christine. “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t Commit.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 23 Nov. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%2BScience&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0.
Upon reading the New York Times masterfull journalist Christine Hauser, Hauser states the central idea her article because not just was Craig Coley was wrongfully imprisoned for murder, but because he was found guilty by judges, he spent nearly 50 years behind bars. However, what makes this case so bad is that Mr. Coley was imprisoned for a crime that he did not commit. This crime as stated by Hauser was that Craig was charged with murder. “Rhonda Wicht, 24, who had recently ended their relationship. Ms. Wicht was found beaten and strangled, apparently with a macramĂ© rope, in her apartment in Simi Valley, Calif., the Ventura County district attorney’s office said. Her son, Daniel, had been smothered” (Christine Hauser). Therefore because Mr. Craig was found guilty of murdering his girlfriend and stepson, based on the evidence at the time was enough to sentence him for 70 years. However, only recently did the sentence get overturned by investigators because as Hauser states a “new investigation” (Hauser) proved that Craig was innocent which was based on new information on DNA Evidence. Thence the main theme that the author presents to us as readers is that while this man got the justice that he deserves, that still does not erase the fact that he was sentenced to a lifetime in jail and because of it, it shows us as Americans how much work we have to do for improving our legal system, even though he did get his innocence after the jury along with the California Governor Jerry Brown delivered the justice that this man deserved after wrongfully being imprisoned for a crime that he did not commit, and was possibly framed .
Jerry Brown’s pardoning of this innocent man not only is important because justice was finally carried out, but it also makes us as Individuals reflect on how efficient our legal system is right now. This is because there is absolutely no excuse whatsoever for wrongfully charging a human for a crime that they did not commit. If there is not enough evidence to prove a suspect is guilty, then the case should be stayed for a period time and thus if new evidence does, in fact, appear, then that case should be reopened for investigation. Hauser’s article reflects on this idea many times over but when she notes that the district attorney for California admits that because of false evidence, injustice was served to this innocent man.  “Mr. Totten vowed his office would “pursue the absolute truth in this decades-old case.” He did not release the names of any new suspects. “As district attorney, I must tell you I look forward to the day when I can shake Mr. Coley’s hand, apologize to him for the injustice he suffered,” Mr. Totten said at a news conference. “I am also hopeful that one day soon we will bring to justice the violent man responsible for this most horrific crime.”” (Hauser). Therefore by Hauser highlighting that because this man was wrongfully acquitted for a murder that he did not commit, the district attorney who led the case against him has now tainted his own legacy as an agent of the law. Because the law is supposed to keep society and those who are innocent safe and serve justice to everyone, however, for this instance injustice was served and for many times over the law and jury system in our country can sometimes be borderline corrupt.
I believe from reading this article was of the biggest strengths that this author did very well was that she jumped into her topic right from the start because she does this very well, it establishes a hook and makes the reader want to keep reading. “A California man who served nearly 40 years in prison for murders of a woman and her 4-year-old son that he said he did not commit has been pardoned by Gov. Jerry Brown after a new investigation proved he was wrongly convicted”  (Housier). I thought the way she structured her article was also very effective because with some of the article that I have read this year, some feel like unevenly balanced and in result, the entire article is somewhat off timing with its perfect potential. While I enjoyed this article very much, one fact which I believe this author could do a better job at was I wished that she could have gone a little deeper into how and what led to the justification by the jury to indict this innocent man for murder back in 1970. I believe that by doing this it makes the article not only better but it makes less complicated for individuals because she does note that he was indicted, but she does so in the legal description. This is an area which I think she can improve because by adding a little more forensic information because I think by adding data regarding the DNA typing test to her article it does only improve her writing, but it adds more verification to her article. Overall, I enjoyed reading this article and the overall reflection that I took away was that even though America has a complex legal system and in a result, some individuals might receive injustice for crimes that they did not commit- even though they are innocent.   

4 comments:

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Hana Eddib 11/28/17
Forensics current event 9

Hauser, Christine. “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t
Commit.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 23 Nov. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%2BScience&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0.
https://www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%20Science&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics&region=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0

Justin’s review on the “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t
Commit" was very interesting. I really appreciate Justin’s ability to summarize the article. He did so with enough detail but in such a clear and concise way. I also appreciated that he continued to highlight the author’s main idea in that even though Craig was let go, it does not replace the 50 years he spent in jail. I really liked Justin’s analyses of the article and Hauser’s failure to include indictment details.
While Justin did write a good review, there were two areas that he could improve on. I wish Justin could’ve explained in further detail what was the DNA evidence that proved Craig’s innocence as it would’ve helped to explain the case further. There were also some writing errors that Justin made that made it a little confusing to follow his review.
Overall, I thought Justin did a good job and I was very surprised to learn that yet another man was found guilty for a crime he did not commit.

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Andy Goldbaum Current Event 9 11/29 Period D
Hauser, Christine. “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t Commit.” The New York Times, © 2017 The New York Times Company, 23 Nov. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%2BScience&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0.
My classmate Justin McCarthy’s review of New York Times article, “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t Commit” by Christine Hauser was very thorough and thought provoking. For example, not only does McCarthy give a detailed summary of what took place in the crime by inserting the quote of exactly what happened to Ms. Wicht and her son Daniel and what was controversial about the sentencing, but he ended his summary paragraph with a look into the legal system as a whole, which served as a smooth transition for when he continues to discuss the legal system in his “big issue” paragraph. Another well-presented aspect of McCarthy’s article was how he clearly stated the message that he took away from the article, thereby answering how this connects to his own personal life by challenging his personal values. Even though the author reassures her audience that the specific mistake that led to Craig R. Coley being indicted can no longer get a person wrongly convicted because of modern forensic techniques, McCarthy explains that he does not find this reassuring because to him there is always a way to avoid wrongly convicting someone: simply don’t try the suspect until the evidence is determined certain by the investigators to be enough. Lastly, McCarthy’s critique paragraph was well-supported and thoughtful. He clearly supports that the author made the article enticing to read from the start by providing the hook, and he goes on to explain that a juxtaposition from how the evidence was tested for in the 70s to what advancements allowed for this case to be solved would have improved the article and its relevance to forensics and provides an example of how the article only talks about his indictment from a legal and not scientific perspective.
One area McCarthy could improve on was his sentence structure and redundant statements. For example, he states that, “ Upon reading the New York Times masterfull journalist Christine Hauser, Hauser states the central idea her article because not just was Craig Coley was wrongfully imprisoned for murder, but because he was found guilty by judges, he spent nearly 50 years behind bars. However, what makes this case so bad is that Mr. Coley was imprisoned for a crime that he did not commit. This crime as stated by Hauser was that Craig was charged with murder.” This could be made into one clean sentence because guilt is always determined by judges, he already mentions murder being the charge in the first sentence, and saying wrongfully imprisoned implies that it was a crime he did not commit. A second area for improvement is that McCarthy could make his statements of personal values more supported by further connecting them to current issues. For example, he describes the legal system as sometimes being “corrupt” without giving an example from the article or from other famous cases where that corruption lies.
Well I knew that people have been falsely convicted for crimes they did not commit in the past, what I did not realize was how improvements in forensics have been made so rapidly that new tests allowed old cases to finally be reopened and solved. This is important because we often think about forensics from the context of bringing current criminals on the loose to justice; however, we often forget that the other main function of forensics is to bring closure to the victims. While this often means emotional closure, such as when the murderer of a widow’s husband is arrested, it also means closure to faulty cases as advancements are made in the field.

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Ayten El-Hennawy
Current Event 9
11/28/17

Hauser, Christine. “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t
Commit.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 23 Nov. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%2BScience&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0.
https://www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%20Science&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics&region=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0

In Justin’s review of the article “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t Commit.” he did a great job of analyzing the article. I liked how Justin made sure he put in every detail throughout his review to make sure the reader had an idea of what exactly was going on. I also liked how he also included the quote which explains what exactly happened to Daniel and his mother Ms. Wicht. Although Justin’s review was great, i think it would’ve been better if he explained the case a little more by including what exactly the evidence was and how that proved Craig’s innocence. I also think it would've been better if he included maybe one or two more quotes from the article.
Overall, I think he did a very good job analyzing the article and giving us a clear idea of what was going on. I also think it’s very surprising how someone was proved to be completely guilty of a crime that they did not commit.

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Andrew Rotchford 11/28/17
Forensics current event 9

Hauser, Christine. “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t
Commit.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 23 Nov. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%2BScience&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0.
https://www.nytimes.com/2017/11/23/us/jerry-brown-pardon-murder.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FForensic%20Science&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics&region=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=1&pgtype=collection&_r=0


Justin did a review on “Jerry Brown Pardons Man Imprisoned for Decades for Murders He Didn’t
Commit" and I think he did a good job keeping the reader interesting. Justin did a great job summarizing the article he went over all the major points that we needed to know. Justin did a good job keeping his review fluid by referring back to the main point the author was trying to get to. Even though Craig was let go it doesn't make up for the 50 years that he spent in jail. Justin did a great job analyzing the article and brought up good points about Hauser’s failure to include indictment details.

Even though Justin did write a very good review there's two things I would suggest that he should improve on.The first thing I wished Justin did better is explaining in further detail why the DNA evidence that prove Craig's innocence as it would have help to explain the case further. Sometimes he had some writing errors with his sentences but that could be easily fixed with another read over.

In the end Justin did a great job and it was very surprising to learn that another person had to spend their almost their whole life in jail because of forensic science.