Sunday, November 17, 2019

Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise

Ellie Dessart
Mr. Ippolito
Forensics C Odd
13 December 2019
Current Event 11

Citation:
Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said
Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019,

Hill and Murphy’s article discusses the controversy over whether or not law enforcement should have access to private DNA profiles. In the past, sites such as Ancenstry.com, 23andMe, and GEDmatch have “long pledged to keep their users’ genetic information private,” but recently, for the first time, a Florida judge granted an investigator a warrant to search GEDmatch’s full database of 1.2 million users. DNA policy experts anticipate a surge in similar warrant requests in the near future as a result of this court decision, which would jeopardize people’s genetic privacy. This could affect not only users of these sites, but also those who have never taken a DNA test before, since “the emerging forensic technique makes it possible to identify a DNA profile through distant family relationships” already entered in the database. Before GEDmatch changed its policy (police previously had access to search the site without a warrant), in April 2018, California law enforcement found a match for the man they believed to be the infamous Golden State Killer. Since then, investigators have turned to genetic genealogy to identify suspects and criminals. Unfortunately, while accessing genealogy sites could solve “hundreds and hundreds of cases solved overnight,” police must be wary of privacy concerns as the debate continues.

This article delves into the complex relationship between science and society. As technology advances and forensic scientists adopt new techniques and methods, potential breakthroughs arise, and while that alone should be celebrated (yay science!), new issues, such as privacy concerns, often emerge. The controversy described in the article is complicated because we, as humans, value both privacy and justice. Forensic science helps law enforcement convict criminals and protect the people, but if it requires unwanted database searches, doesn’t that infringe on the very protection it was supposed to ensure? What contributions to science are we obligated to make, if any? Such questions can only be answered with time and future developments. 

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed the article. Firstly, the piece was concise and simple to follow, as opposed to past lengthy New York Times posts I’ve read. The authors structured it well by first giving some context, then detailing the Florida court ruling, and finishing with a discussion of the issue’s prevalence in recent years since the Golden State Killer arrest. Additionally, the article compelled me to consider the rights I most value and question the extent to which I’m willing to give them up. However, the authors fell short on some minor aspects. Firstly, they failed to define ‘genetic genealogy.’ If they had provided a brief explanation of the term, it would have helped younger readers, like myself, to better understand the subject matter. Secondly, while the article does a nice job focusing on the scientific complexities of the controversy, it could have made some additional, broader connections to society as a whole. For example, I found it particularly interesting how the investigators and genetic profiling companies share the same argument, same goal, but different viewpoints. The police want access to the profiles so they can do their job (protect the people), and the companies want to deny such access so they can do the same (protect the people)! Can the two sides reach a compromise, or is such a clash inevitable? It’s an interesting dynamic, and to create more depth to the article, I’d consider adding some of these observations. 




7 comments:

Molly Palma said...

Molly Palma
Mr. Ippolito
Forensics C Odd
Current Event 9
Due Nov. 25th

Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said
Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019,
www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-
warrant.html.

https://bhscsi.blogspot.com/2019/11/your-dna-profile-is-private-florida_17.html

Ellie effectively summarizes the article “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise.” She gives the names of the sites that hold DNA profiles, talks about the rules that keep this information private, and explains why these rules are in jeopardy (because of the warrant just put out by a Florida Judge). Ellie uses the rhetorical appeal of ethos to describe the importance of the article when she says,“the controversy described in the article is complicated because we, as humans, value both privacy and justice”. This is extremely useful in a review because generally people are curious about why a particular thing (object, idea, etc) would have an effect on them. This review explains why releasing private information goes against the values that we hold near and dear. Lastly, Ellie comes across as well educated. There are examples of this: she made an allusion to the Golden State Killer and described her previous experiences reading New York Times articles.

Ellie might’ve been a too dramatic at times. In her second paragraph, she wrote “yay, science!” in parenthesis. This was slightly comical and kept the reader engaged. Ellie used this same technique to emphasize her point about protecting peoples’ information in the third paragraph. At that point, it seemed like a little too much. I would keep the first parenthesis and delete the other one. Also, I felt that while the conclusion paragraph was informational, it dragged on a bit. To prevent this, Ellie would keep key insights and cut out the repetitive details, such as the one about the Golden State Killer.

This review is very relevant in today’s times because it talks about the problems with popular DNA sites. I’ve used 23andMe before, which was one of the sites listed in Ellie’s review, and remember seeing these ‘pledges’ to keep my information safe. I chose this article because I wanted to be educated about my safety in this regard. Ellie did a great job living up to this seemingly important topic. After reading it, I have some curiosity about what might happen with the warrant down in Florida and the many more that are predicted to follow.

Unknown said...

Logan Glick
Forensics
Current Event 9
11/22/19

Citation:
Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said
Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019,
www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-
warrant.html.

Website: https://bhscsi.blogspot.com/2019/11/your-dna-profile-is-private-florida_17.html

Ellie Dessert wrote a great piece about whether or not law enforcement should have access to DNA profiles. She discusses how many websites such as ancetry.com have taken people DNA samples and uploaded them to a website called GEDmatch, “In the past, sites such as Ancenstry.com, 23andMe, and GEDmatch have “long pledged to keep their users’ genetic information private” Here she wonderfully explains how websites swear to keep their users info private, but actually they are not. This is ridiculous because that means people’s data can be taken at will. She also explains this wonderfully, “DNA policy experts anticipate a surge in similar warrant requests in the near future as a result of this court decision, which would jeopardize people’s genetic privacy.” This is a wonderful sentence because she captures the ridiculous things websites are doing. Ellie did a great job with that and follows it up with this sentence, “Before GEDmatch changed its policy (police previously had access to search the site without a warrant), in April 2018, California law enforcement found a match for the man they believed to be the infamous Golden State Killer.” This sentence shows how much effort she put into this writing and it really helps the piece flow and work well.
Ellie did a great job, but there are definitely some areas she could improve upon. The first would be in this sentence, “This article delves into the complex relationship between science and society.” She needs to elaborate more. This sentence does not process how these relationships are complex and I think she could really use some more evidence. Another area she could improve on is this sentence, “Forensic science helps law enforcement convict criminals and protect the people, but if it requires unwanted database searches, doesn’t that infringe on the very protection it was supposed to ensure?” This sentence has potential but it needs an answer to the question it poses, instead of using a “?” she should round the sentence out and make it complete.
This article taught me a lot about how easily people DNA can end up on websites even if they did not sign off on that process. Law enforcement cannot use people's information without them asking. However, they feel the need to do it. This article will affect me because it shows me that I cannot trust DNA websites and I will never use them.

Unknown said...

Jordan Hoang
Mr. Ippolito
AP Forensics C Odd
11/23/19

Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said
Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019,
www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-
warrant.html.

https://bhscsi.blogspot.com/2019/11/your-dna-profile-is-private-florida_17.html

While reading Ellie’s review of the article, “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise”, I really enjoyed her style of writing. She added personal flares to her review such as the lines “Yay science!” that made me more interested to see what she had to say on the dangers in ancestry websites. In addition, I liked how Ellie made use of rhetorical questions, like “ Forensic science helps law enforcement convict criminals and protect the people, but if it requires unwanted database searches, doesn’t that infringe on the very protection it was supposed to ensure?”. She asked similar questions such as this; I believe she helped readers think more critically and personally about this situation and how it impacts their lives. Finally, I thought Ellie’s review was overall very thorough, yet consinse. Her review was smooth and easy to read despite having thoughtful ideas on the matter.

One thing I wish Ellie did was elaborate on the Golden State Killer. While I think it was a good idea to give an example of how DNA datebase websites were being used to track murderers, I think it would be interesting for readers to hear more about the logistics of this specific killer. In addition to this, I wish Ellie touched more on what specific privacy concerns these DNA tracking websites could inflict on people. While many may be aware of the dangers, I think adding this to the review would have emphasized how dangerous this lack of security could be for society.

It is frightening to see how much access the government could have to our personal information through only a simple ancestry test. But as Ellie mentioned, the development of this technology could aid greatly in forensic investigation. It is all up to how we use this technology and genetic information- if we use it incorrectly, we could greatly hurt society in the long run.



Unknown said...

Eve Balseiro
Current Event Comment 9

Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said
Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019,
www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-
warrant.html.

https://bhscsi.blogspot.com/2019/11/your-dna-profile-is-private-florida_17.html

Ellie’s synopsis of “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise” is detailed and well-articulated. Specifically, she had three aspects that were very well done. Firstly, I enjoyed how she gave examples of sites where one can access their DNA profile. I feel that the extra attention to detail really enhanced her summary. Secondly, Ellie’s utilized quotes from her article very well. She integrated them very well which allowed them to add another layer to her summary. Thirdly, Ellie described the relationship between science and society excellently. It was a very interesting analysis and was also very well written.
To improve, there are two main elements that would have been helpful. Firstly, if Ellie shorted her summary it may have been easier for the reader to follow along. Secondly, had Ellie cut the conclusion a little bit shorter it would not have dragged on as much.
From Ellie analysis of the article “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise” was a well-written synopsis of the incredibly relevant piece. I furthered my knowledge on the existing debate. I chose to read Ellie’s review because I have gotten my DNA profile from ancestry.com and I wanted to remain in the loop about what has happened to my profile since the initial test. Also, I am much more curious to see what may happen with this case or others like it.

Unknown said...

Madison Meehan
11/24/19
Forensics D Odd
Current Event 9

Citation: Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-warrant.html.

https://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=4250390869532540972&postID=3667679385156006901

While reading Ellie’s review of the article “Your DNA profle is private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise” I learned a lot of new information. Ellie started with a detailed summary of the article, allowing me to understand the topic. She included a lot of data in her response, which further qualified the facts she was mentioning. Her use of quotes from the article also made her summary even stronger.

Although Ellie did a great job responding to this article, there were a couple things she could do to make it even stronger. Even though her conclusion stated her opinion of the article well, she definitely could have shortened it. Lastly, I think her summary could’ve been slightly less detailed than it was even though it did provide a lot of good information.

Overall, Ellie did a very good job responding to this article and I learned a lot. I learned not to trust certain websites and to never think anything is private even if it says so. You never know where your information is going, which is vital to think about especially when it has to do with your DNA.

Unknown said...

Masha Popovic
11/24/19
Forensics D Odd
Current Event 9

Citation: Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-warrant.html.

https://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=4250390869532540972&postID=3667679385156006901


Ellie’s report on the article “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said Otherwise”, was very informative. She did a great job with being concise and providing easy to understand information. Secondly, I love the observation she made of a relationship between science and society. It made for a very interesting body paragraph and made her report more intriguing. Lastly, I believe Ellie created a wonderful concluding paragraph, explaining her thoughts on the article in full detail.

As great as Ellie’s report was, there were a few areas that could use some improvements. For one, I would have loved to see an incorporation of quotes from the article to add evidence to her claims. As much as I loved her explanation in the last paragraph, it felt a bit long, so shortening it would make her report more enjoyable.

Overall, Ellie did a wonderful job with this current event assignment. It was detailed and she created an interesting read. I feel liked a learned a great deal about trust within technology and I look forward to future reports from her.

Charlotte Dotson said...

Charlotte Dotson
Mr. Ippolito
Decembmer 2, 2019
Current Event 10

Citation: Hill, Kashmir, and Heather Murphy. “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Just Said
Otherwise.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 5 Nov. 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/11/05/business/dna-database-search-warrant.html.

For current event 10, I read Ellie’s review of “Your DNA Profile Is Private? A Florida Judge Said Otherwise”. This review was engaging and informative; I learned a lot about it from the review. The first thing she did well was including specifics in her summary. For example, she provided the names of sites where one could look for their DNA profile. Secondly, Ellie had a great judgment with her quote use. She did not use too many where her thoughts were erased but used enough to lend credibility to her summary. Last, her summary was comprehensive and easily understandable; allowing the reader to have a good understanding of the case.
One thing Ellie could have improved in this review is her conclusion. It was filled with good points, but because of its length, it was difficult for the reader to absorb all the information. Had she shortened it a little I think it would be more effective. Secondly, it would have been interesting to read more about the ethical/privacy concerns this ruling calls into question. The review was filled with informational details, but this is one topic where I think they were lacking.
It was interesting to read this article and hear both sides of the argument. Through studying forensics I have learned how important DNA is to solving cases; DNA profiles are a large help to the government/law enforcement when solving crimes. On the other hand, privacy concerns are understandable. It is frightening to me to imagine a world where the government has a full DNA profile on every citizen.